tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-551396151104048204.post8306815255283355693..comments2011-01-10T03:01:16.952-05:00Comments on Third Eye Watching: Prelude to The KissThird Eye Watchinghttp://www.blogger.com/profile/00969873738610326769noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-551396151104048204.post-5439238888257503602010-08-05T15:17:59.857-05:002010-08-05T15:17:59.857-05:00I like how this poem flows; it is like the icy riv...I like how this poem flows; it is like the icy river that I think of while I am reading it. It is fun moving back and forth through the visions that are invoked while you read, definitely a one of your more prolific poems.Restored2lifehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11750219765588968514noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-551396151104048204.post-89161414591969014532009-04-16T19:40:00.000-05:002009-04-16T19:40:00.000-05:00I guess you didn't think I would take on the chall...I guess you didn't think I would take on the challenge. You still have time to craft your piece. Patiently awaiting the good read. <br />PAD is definitely a challenge... I'm enjoying it. :)Third Eye Watchinghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00969873738610326769noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-551396151104048204.post-77192406264797660072009-04-16T15:36:00.000-05:002009-04-16T15:36:00.000-05:00ok I threw down the gauntlet and yo umet it..lol.....ok I threw down the gauntlet and yo umet it..lol...I will have to draft my approach and post soon. Seriously, I enjoyed this. I think it was because it was rhythmic and flirty without being overtly sexual. And it is nice to have a piece where sex isn't the goal, deeper connection is. I am sure this one would "read" well too. We are halfway thru PAD...wonder what it will look like when we review the body of work..lolUnknownhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08205004080263149999noreply@blogger.com